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My perfect world is one of strife
With tears and blood flowing free
Corpses and limbs will litter the streets
A courtesy to Death from only me

My ambitions will bear fruit
Red crimson, no other hue
Pictures will dot the remaining walls
Wistful ramblings shown with melancholic rue

The paintings speak of tragedy
Eternal suffering with no end
Of the figures that lie beneath and under ground
Faces; masks of agony and torment

Smoky plants flourish
Sprouting from maroon dirt
The flowers fall, wilting
Not a single petal unhurt

This is the world I longed for
A world where no one speaks
And nothing is left, nothing that lives
Or even a little seed

This is the world where no one is alone
For everyone reunites in death
And hurtful words and sneers are never spoken
For there isn't a single breath

There is no pain
For nothing likely can compare
There are no social statuses
For as corpses all are fair

This is the world I dreamed for
Where all my wishes wholly came true
But why is it, then..
That my vision fills with blue?

The perfect world was what I longed for
And this was the result
All of the things I wished and worked for
This is how things turned out

And I wonder..
If, perhaps..
My wishes were too hasty,
And the world was not already perfect.. As it is?
For :iconheartangelfied: 's Contest, My Perfect World [link]
I think it's somewhat.. Off, from the general theme, but.. A normal world with tranquil lakes and grass was a little too peaceful to write right now.. XD
Well! It was fun, anyways! :P

*I'm disappointed with myself for repeating the rhyming words 'rue' and 'hue' .. >.<
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:iconvivimorena:
vivimorena Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
I like how descriptive the image drawn is. With all the colors and changes flowing one from another.
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Klei-Brandybear Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the comment! :)
I'm glad you liked it ^^
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:iconvivimorena:
vivimorena Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
:) I also like your signature.
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:iconklei-brandybear:
Klei-Brandybear Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe, thank you! XD
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Nine-Inch-N41L5 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
How delightfully morbid... :iconmuhahaplz:
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:iconklei-brandybear:
Klei-Brandybear Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :P
I rather like those two words..
"Delightfully morbid" :D
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Nine-Inch-N41L5 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
Indeed, an interesting oxymoron if I do say so myself.
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itsjustrhon Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
This has to be my favorite poem, now....
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:iconklei-brandybear:
Klei-Brandybear Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe. Thank you! :)
I'm glad you like it? ^^
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itsjustrhon Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
:) you're welcome!!!
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